The editing is coming along nicely — slowly, but nicely. However, I have come across one paragraph that desperately needs rewording. Yet the right words will NOT come to mind. I’ve tried using words that mean a similar thing in the hope that something will pop out at me later, but even that isn’t working well. I even got my trusty dictionary out and tried looking up synonyms of words. It didn’t help.
Frustrated, I highlighted the paragraph and moved on. Hopefully, I’ll return to the paragraph later and something will spark my brain into action.
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